LI: choosing specific vocab add detail to emotions.
Show not telling.
Showing angry by.
His face is looking like a tomato
They make there arms wide like there tough
Clench fists
Body shaking
Veins popping
Teeth grinding
Heart was racing
Embarrassed
Blushing,
Big eyes
Shaking
Turn red
Running away
Speechless
Shocked
Big breath
Big eyes
Stomping, open mouth,
Sick
Losing ur voice
Look pale
Weak body
Hold ur stomach
Cold
Shivering
Cant move
Your body feels numb
Goose bumps
Lips turn blue
Feet turn white…
Shy
Speechless
Tryna hide
Watery eyes
Face turns red
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